Troy0524

Hi!! Welcome to YWS! Look forward to your future works!

Hi Lina! Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! This piece is a class project and aims to prepare for a longer novel, so indeed there are something missing ...

Hey! It's definitely okay, I'll wait till you get enough points!

Thanks!! I'm struggling for a more detailed plot these days, but as you said, maybe I should start writing before figuring everything out. My story is also about a teenager ...

I haven't worked out the chapters; I'm still thinking about the plot and characters. It took me a long time to figure these out. Did you under go the same ...

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Hi! Here I am for Chapter 4! While I read through it, I started to feel the same peace and calmness as Nova did. Your language and your writing style ...

Hi!! Thank you so much! I never imagined getting such a long, detailed, and beautiful review. I'm so happy that you spent time reading Alex's story and understanding her inner ...

Hi!! I would definitely check chapter 4 when I'm done with all my works (sorry I'm busy around these days). Look forward to it!

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This chapter describes the morning training at Uncle Max's house, which gives me a more vivid impression of what Nova's life is like. It also worked out pretty well for ...

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Hi! I really love your work! I think this is a fascinating topic and the first chapter is very intruging. I like the main character Nova - smart, courageous, risk-taking, ...

Hi! Thank you for your comments! Charles knew what the shop should be like because after he got trapped, he became the "manager" of the shop when waiting for the ...

Thanks! The tenses are indeed a bit confusing since English is not my native language, and I'll try to do better next time. Charles is just someone who got trapped ...

Thank you for your comments! Wish you a nice day/night!