Tropicana

First- thank you all for reading! And Second I'm finished with the second part!! Yay! I think I might post it tomorrow maybe today if I finish my homework fast ...

But thats just what poetry is, writing your thoughts down on a piece of paper or typing it up on a computer then arranging it in any order you please. ...

Thanks Wiggy, Sorry about the random ?'s everywhere... I don't know how that happened.... -Maggie

Yeah some one really did die. My friend Hannah. September 2nd. I liked this... I liked the first two lines but then after that things sort of got ... wordy, ...

I liked your poem very, very much. But the one issue I had was that you rhymed 'you' and 'you' in the first stanza. Other than that it was perfectly ...

Thanks for the ideas _Anti_ !! I think I might edit the post to so it's like that. That is if the computer is in a good mood today. I'm ...

This was good, but for some reason alot of the words turned into random symbols... I'm not sure if that's just my computer or something else. I liked what I ...

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Same comments as before minus the "As an American...." Absolutely Genius *appauldes till hands kill and are totally red and have lost the feeling in the tips of the fingers* ...

Bad spelling was there because it's a diary. Plus i'm not finished and theres a plot believe me :D bye.

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:D THANKS

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sorry i accidently posted twice :D