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Thank you for you your comments! Yeah I was meant to change the capitalized 'He' so yeah it is the same person. I wasn't quite sure whether it was a ...

Thank you!! I will definitely touch it up after your comments %uD83D%uDE0A

Wow thank you a lot!! That actually really helped!! I know exactly what to do now haha Thanks again! :D

Thanks Dreamy! I'm so glad you liked it! haha thanks for advice :)

Thanks :) haha I probably need to think about writing more seeing as this was just meant to be a short story..

Thanks Olive!!! :) Yeah! It does look better with a capital, i think i must have missed that as i was typing haha Just saying, it isnt a new speaker ...

Thank you soooo much Iggy!!! That's some great advice! :D It is meant to be a short story, but I might continue it. The Echo says the last line, just ...

Sure, no problem :)

Hey! This is incredibly described! It really feels like you are feeling what the person in this is feeling. I feel like I know the pain she/he is going through, ...

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Hey! This is incredibly described! It really feels like you are feeling what the person in this is feeling. I feel like I know the pain she/he is going through, ...