Trikky

Wow, I couldn't stop reading until the end! Very forceful! I like! In the instant before the palace collapsed I felt the guilt swarm me, take me by surprise I ...

The Road? Sounds good, I'll have to check it out. Your description of the murderers in No Country for Old Men reminds me of Dick and Perry from Truman Capote's ...

Aww! I love cat stories. Just had to review ^_~ It's a little odd that the cat finds birds, a bee, and a butterfly all in a row. Sounds like ...

This was pretty good, I like what you're saying, but I have to agree with AoD that the rhyme was forced in a lot of places. You might already know ...

Oh man, My Antonia. That book sucked. It's just one of those "Why would I care about this?" books. But yes, classics are awesome! That's why they're classics... Anyway, I ...

Ha... this is funny because I read this after breaking up with a (really, pretty good) boyfriend. I guess I threw the lemons away. *is a bitch* :( If Life ...

Ah! Alabama! I used to live there... there are a lot of good things about Alabama, but the teachers aren't one of them. -_-; So I'm interested, and I sympathize ...

I love the title-- it reminds me of that Yes song.. Primus Schindera (The Fish) or something like that. Also, I love Fish. It's delicious. Sorry for rambling ^^; Quoting ...

This was about a mermaid, right? It reminds me a little bit of the mermaids in Harry Potter, with the screeching/singing. It's hard to tell though, I think you may ...

It's hard to critique lyrics without the music, but here goes: Isn’t this amusing? Since it's a question, this line seems to break from the screaming tone. Looks like even ...

Flags placed up; a gesture of surrender. Placed is kind of a boring word, I think you can do better ;) These are the plans that would always fall through: ...

This was an interesting piece, but I don't know if I understood it very well... Tapering the strings attached to my shoulder's, shoulder's --> shoulders limited the time of the ...

You hate Edgar Allen Poe? Hoowwww? TT_TT Maybe people make too big a deal out of it for what it is (popular fiction/horror), but how can you hate it? C'mon, ...

The Invisible Man!!! For sure! I love that book, so, so much. It's ridiculous. I read it at least once a year, since... 8th grade, I think. I would draw ...

Wow, this was really well-written. The first thing I noticed about it was the paragraph length; they were more or less equal, without any giant walls of text with little ...