TreeHugger12

It was a cute and sweet gesture. And I liked it a lot. That's all I can say...

kinda confusing ain't it? Is it possible to delete posts?

BTW, you probably read my first two failed attempts at improving this story. If you haven't read the first two chapters of this character's story, I suggest you should.

Well, I've never really read or watched the Percy Jackson Movie and I wrote this a year ago... But sure, I'll watch out for that. Thanks for the tip. :)

Thanks again... I appreciate comments like yours Ranger Hawk, they're really helpful! :)

Thanks for the tips and comments! They were helpful!

Loved this one! I loved probably as much as you loved writing it! It was totally awesome!!! I sure hope you keep it up!

No, no, no!!! Don't stop! these stories are great! I love them... They are quite good.... I want to know what happened and what is going to happen to Alice! ...

I liked this better than the first. You really are getting better. Could you PM me when you upload the third?

Oh, by the way, PM me the next time you post a chapter. :)

I'm sorry, I haven't written in a while. This is actually an "old" story. I got a bad case of writer's block. So I wasn't able to read it or ...

Thanks for all your posts! I know I have a lot to learn. Thanks for your comments. they were helpful! I think I might have a problem with describing the ...

Wow, you left me breathless. But somehow, it seemed quite short. I'm not really good at reviewing or critiquing or that stuff but, I think I know enough to say ...

All I can say is AWESOME. Great imagination... Although you should have described the stony rhino thingy even more. But all in all, it was great! Loved it.