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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)

    No problem! :)

    Feb 4, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)

    Sorry for the confusion, I used the wrong sign. :)

    Feb 4, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)

    Hi! Thanks for the advice. :) I didn't really have a real reason for naming her Tuesday, other than it kind of suited her, but recently I came up with ...

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)

    Thanks for the review! I uhh, kinda forgot about the trans ladies out there (which is a little embarrassing because there IS a trans lady later in this story, and ...

    Jan 31, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Action / Adventure Re: Lost - Prologue (Improved) and Chapter 1.A

    The anticipation is killing me! :D

    Jan 29, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 5 (rough draft)

    Hi! Thanks for bringing the repetitiveness and comma splices to my attention. :) I'll try to improve on those in the future. I tried to spice this character up a ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 5 (rough draft)

    Hi! Thanks for the quick grammar check! Appreciate it. :)

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 5 (rough draft)

    Hi! Thanks for the review. :) I agree that the start is a little off-putting, this is because of the stupid way I decided to write this story 3 months ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Short Story Place Description

    Oh, sorry! I guess it was the voice I read it in in my head that made me think it was a dude. Thanks for telling me! Oh, also, I ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)

    Thank you! I'll read through them when I get the chance! :)

    Jan 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)

    Yeah, I've been working on that since I started this project but it's kinda hard to write characters. The next one different though, at least I think so.

    Jan 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)

    Oh, sure! Send me a link to them if you can. :) I'll try to remember to tell you! It should come up sometime near the next review day!

    Jan 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)

    Hi! Thanks for the review. :) You mentioned that the characters don't have much individuality to them, this will change, they get more and more different as the chapters go ...

    Jan 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)

    Hi! Thanks for the review. :) I hadn't noticed the lack of atmosphere before, thanks for bringing that to my attention. You mentioned that the characters don't seem to have ...

    Jan 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Average, chapter 3 (rough draft)

    Thanks for the review! You didn't offend me, don't worry. I totally understand where you're coming from with the dialogue thing, this character is a little hard to write for. ...

    Jan 6, 2018


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