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Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)
No problem! :)
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)
Sorry for the confusion, I used the wrong sign. :)
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)
Hi! Thanks for the advice. :) I didn't really have a real reason for naming her Tuesday, other than it kind of suited her, but recently I came up with ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)
Thanks for the review! I uhh, kinda forgot about the trans ladies out there (which is a little embarrassing because there IS a trans lady later in this story, and ...
Jan 31, 2018 -
Re: Lost - Prologue (Improved) and Chapter 1.A
The anticipation is killing me! :D
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 5 (rough draft)
Hi! Thanks for bringing the repetitiveness and comma splices to my attention. :) I'll try to improve on those in the future. I tried to spice this character up a ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 5 (rough draft)
Hi! Thanks for the quick grammar check! Appreciate it. :)
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 5 (rough draft)
Hi! Thanks for the review. :) I agree that the start is a little off-putting, this is because of the stupid way I decided to write this story 3 months ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Short Story Place Description
Oh, sorry! I guess it was the voice I read it in in my head that made me think it was a dude. Thanks for telling me! Oh, also, I ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)
Thank you! I'll read through them when I get the chance! :)
Jan 25, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)
Yeah, I've been working on that since I started this project but it's kinda hard to write characters. The next one different though, at least I think so.
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)
Oh, sure! Send me a link to them if you can. :) I'll try to remember to tell you! It should come up sometime near the next review day!
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)
Hi! Thanks for the review. :) You mentioned that the characters don't have much individuality to them, this will change, they get more and more different as the chapters go ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)
Hi! Thanks for the review. :) I hadn't noticed the lack of atmosphere before, thanks for bringing that to my attention. You mentioned that the characters don't seem to have ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 3 (rough draft)
Thanks for the review! You didn't offend me, don't worry. I totally understand where you're coming from with the dialogue thing, this character is a little hard to write for. ...
Jan 6, 2018
