Torpid

Prologue They called him The Elder. Because he was the oldest resident Victorious Gardens Veteran Center had ever seen. Every morning the weathered old man gingerly crept outside the facility ...

dude this is awesome, u need to add on, least i think so. the only part that for some reasn did not sound beautiful to me was the beggining of ...

dude this is awesome, u need to add on, least i think so. the only part that for some reasn did not sound beautiful to me was the beggining of ...

I had a dream i could fly, only it was like swimming on water, and it turned lucid so i just paddled around my ceiling all night long. Most of ...

you should try to continue it. The white armor and melee blades reminded me of SW though.

JOSH!!! put sum effort inta this mahan! its got potentil

u need to revise this dude, i thought it was kinda funny though. Cool.

thanks josh

the pooter films, hehe

Yes, there is nothing new under the sun :wink:

The nazgul dementor topic you've got a point. She borrows stuff from Mythology and a few from Tolkien though. I dont really hold that against her, i like to do ...

I jumped around in some places and it looks good. Didn't know u had been banned...shadow is definetly better now. And by the way, i sent u a pm. ~Torpid

Thats cool, nice little entertaining story on...sisters

okay thanks....

Well, now that Jiggy's gone who'll read my story? I know what comes next but im gunna wait to write it for just a little bit...