ToritheMonster

Hi! Okay, my review's in the spoiler, my corrections/comments are in reddish pink. Asterisks mean I took something out. Ben wasn't an outgoing person. This is why he amazed himself ...

Brilliant. Pure brilliance. Your skills awe me. --Dreamy

Come on!

pleasyplease?????????

Please? :smt064

Hey guys, I've had lots of people who've been reviewing my other parts of my story... and nobody (besides Seraph, thanks Seraph :D ) has really done any reviews of ...

Thankee!

Ha. Thanks, but I'll learn it for free in school. ;) Can't wait to do a real review of the English part! --Dreamy

To Kate: That's cool , I didn't realize that. Didn't mean to offend or anything. So, bookgeek, could you post this in English as well? That way you can get ...

Thankee!

Thanks!

Yay! It's featured again! Thanks, whoever liked this!

Aw! This isn't a featured work anymore. If anyone wants to like it.....

Come on! just one measly review!

Thanks, Ben and July!