Torigirl15

Haha I'm glad you liked it. It makes me happy to know that someone besides me likes it too! that would be greatly valued if you were able to find ...

that source was very helpful thank you! i actually own a book with a lot of those creatures in it, but i was looking for further information, and this was ...

There are a lot of run ons, and this is very confusing... i wasn't sure what was going on a lot of the time...

This story was so sad... but i still enjoyed reading it!

This story was so full of emotion! i loved it! The descriptions were well put, although i was a little confused about why both plants were in the same garden... ...

thank you! i'm always looking for new websites to check, and yes, i really did a lot of research for this story... i've checked out a lot of books, and ...

This was amazing. The imagery was great, and i can't think of anything else to say about it other than it is amazing.

Good, except for a lot of run on sentances. You need to keep an eye on that! =)

I really like this! you should definitly post more! i was confused about the shape shifters, fairies, vampires and humans, but i'm sure that the reason why they are fighting ...

edited a few parts, mainly the very end, and the part that brassnbridle pointed out. =)

haha yes, i did mean it as a figure of speech... sorry if it was confusing.

hahah yes, my character does fall down a lot... i was having a hard time trying to figure out ending for certain... "scenes" while i was writing. And i often ...

Really good. I liked the emotion in it. Could have started out a little better, but i think that this was an amazing heartwarming story nonetheless. sad that this is ...

now i'm really confused as to what is going on... maybe i will wait for the next chapter before critiqueing.

thank you for the suggustions on changing the last two lines, and yes i was supposed to add in puncuation for the first stanza, thank you for telling me!