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  • Other » Realistic, General Re: the pretty people

    I'm sorry :(

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Country Mouse Chapter 4

    Hi AEChronicle, Well, first, I'm not quite sure how to tell you this, but they're actually not mice... The title is just a play on the old story of the ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Stardust on the Seashore

    Hi S.s, This work is actually still being revised, so I appreciate your insights! It might be a while before I update it here, but I try to work on ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Stardust on the Seashore

    Hi Christina, Thanks for your review! I always appreciate constructive criticism. I do have a few other works already, and there'll be more of this stuff coming along. I also ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Ignore

    *Until after she's met all the guys, I mean. Sorry :P

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Stardust on the Seashore

    Thanks! @the night sky thing, not neccessarily. Sometimes the sky is lit up very brightly at night, and sometimes it is especially dark. I wanted to make it clear that ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Thief Assassin: Chapter 4

    Oh, and how do I paste quotes into my reviews without using the copy/paste thing? I know I've seen it done, but I can't figure out how. thanks!

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Joy

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! That was what I wanted, to make people want to enjoy being alive for the sake of being alive. Life is a precious gift, ...

    Oct 29, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Joy

    You don't think expressing happiness is enough? It's certainly not a poem. A story can be a complex writing, with plot twists and character developments and deep moral meanings, but ...

    Oct 29, 2012
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Joy

    Thanks :)

    Oct 29, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: For her (Chapter Four)

    When is Chapter 5?

    Oct 29, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: For her (Chapter Four)

    When is Chapter 5 coming out?

    Aug 16, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: My Boy

    wow... I really like this, but it made me so sad! I almost lost someone special to me, and it made me feel as if I really did. :'( Very ...

    Jul 8, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: Slowly, She Radiates

    No problem :) Like I said, it was really very good overall.

    Jul 7, 2012
  • Other » Realistic, Satire Re: Bipolarity

    I really liked this. You did a great job bringing out the varying emotions. :)

    Jul 7, 2012


Let yourself be silently drawn by the strange pull of what you really love. It will not lead you astray.
— Rumi