TinyMochi

ya sorry, I thought I did vary the ages... oh, sorry I guess I forgot, I will do better next time, when I have enough time, I will continue this ...

thanks! :D no your not harsh, but don't worry my grammar has gotten better :D

thanks, I have not seen that movie, is it good? thanks again for the review, that's an awesome goal! :D good luck with it, one of these days I will ...

Ya this was my first work I believe, it was awful :I thanks for the review :)

Wings Of FIRE!!

Oh, hahahaha! thank you for the review, this was my first ever work, I meant to delete it because it was so weird! and I wrote it when I was ...

and no you were not being harsh, you were telling the truth :D I understand :) thank you!

thank you so much! I will work on it :D

thanks for the help! :D

thank you so much for the help :D

shore thing!

:D

Great job dogs!!!!!

haha, thanks mage

thanks, ya its bin so long sitns I have written this so sorry about all the problems :)