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Re: Pain
Hello, My name is Tropic and I am here to review your work ;) So it was interesting, I main honestly I am more into nature poems or love poems ...
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: 12:52 pm
Hello their!! Chibi Elephants here to review your awesome work!!!! :) 1 I love it, just how you like, started it and I quote, "looking at a chart of vascular ...
Jan 9, 2017 -
Re: chapter 6 of goblin of darkness
this is really good!!! OH MY GOSH ALL I CAN THINK OF IS WHAT IS GOING TO HAPIN TO ETHAN. He got some reel respect in this chapter and so ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: chapter 5
O,M,GOSH!!!!!!!! respect Smaug respect, this is awesome my favorite chapter by fare I do not no why but I just love it! Ethan has more respect now, and about the ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: the edvencher of Jake, chapter one Jake's dad has gon mad!
hey cousin, I really like how you did this up it is pretty awesome :) the only thing I have to say is pore JAKE I would not want to ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: chapter 2
OMG this is such an awesome chapter, I love the beginning it is a really good step up from the last chapters beginning :D I like how Jason and Caleb ...
Sep 6, 2016 -
Re: 'The Goblin of Darkness' - Chapter One - Black Smog
I liked the beginning of it a lot, maybe just don't rush into it so fast and some of the beginning was not to necessary, there are also some spelling ...
Sep 6, 2016