TinyMochi

Hello, My name is Tropic and I am here to review your work ;) So it was interesting, I main honestly I am more into nature poems or love poems ...

Hello their!! Chibi Elephants here to review your awesome work!!!! :) 1 I love it, just how you like, started it and I quote, "looking at a chart of vascular ...

this is really good!!! OH MY GOSH ALL I CAN THINK OF IS WHAT IS GOING TO HAPIN TO ETHAN. He got some reel respect in this chapter and so ...

O,M,GOSH!!!!!!!! respect Smaug respect, this is awesome my favorite chapter by fare I do not no why but I just love it! Ethan has more respect now, and about the ...

hey cousin, I really like how you did this up it is pretty awesome :) the only thing I have to say is pore JAKE I would not want to ...

OMG this is such an awesome chapter, I love the beginning it is a really good step up from the last chapters beginning :D I like how Jason and Caleb ...

I liked the beginning of it a lot, maybe just don't rush into it so fast and some of the beginning was not to necessary, there are also some spelling ...