TinyDancer

Wow, great volatile emotion here- I do agree with whoever it was up there that said it needed more sensory elements. I didn't feel locked out necessarily, just left in ...

Ha! This is great! I was all ready to be sad about a breakup then I kept reading and realized it was about a Twizzler. That's fantastic- very original and ...

Hey there- I really liked this piece because of the unique view you gave of the breakup. The flow could use some more work, but you've got something good here! ...

Wow! Great piece. I loved the tone. You really captured the feeling of a thunderstorm. Storms are one of my favorite things to write about for this reason- they are ...

Such a beautiful picture, and familiar too. Even if someone has never been in that specific scenario, they could feel as though they have. I love the detail and I ...

I'm not really a cat person, but I really liked your piece. It was interesting to take a look into the mind of an animal. I always love that. I ...