TinyDancer

Hey there, just returning a favor for your review on my piece. Anyway... First of all, I absolutely love this piece. It almost made me cry because it is sooooo ...

I thought this was a cute and funny spin on the original tale. I also like how it's told from Grumpy's perspective. I was a little bit on the fence ...

I have goosebumps! This is fantastic. A very fitting title as well. The person above me already brought about the run-on errors and the whole Ralph inconsistency, but other than ...

Make this a novel!! Or at least longer. I really liked it! I didn't feel rushed at all, but you definitely could've expanded it a little...or a lot ;) Anyway, ...

Beautiful. I really loved the way you played the words here. You made them work for you very nicely. I was a bit lost at times, but when I read ...

Awww I loved this! :) it was so sweet and beautiful and had such a lovely flow! I'm still no expert at poetry, but I really got into this piece. ...

Yay! Another piece of poetry from Zombie :) You made my day better by posting!! hehe ok, now for the review: I loved LOVED LOVED the first and second stanzas, ...

AMEN SISTAH hehe ;) I can't really give a whole lot of commentary here because it wasn't exactly a whole piece, but way to get it out :) You could ...

Hmmm.... I didn't quite understand a few parts of it, but with good writers come readers like I who can't fully understand the mastermind's intent. I wanted to find it ...

Hey there, me again! Once again, you portray a lovely dark voice in this piece. I love the title as well. It's an attention grabber and that is very important! ...

Aw this was just as good as the other two! It was sad having to go through the pain with Christian of your love not being able to remember you. ...

Hey there-- I thought this was adorable and beautiful and heartbreaking. I loved the setting and although I haven't read any other parts of your novel, I think I just ...

Hey :) It looks like you have a great beginning to a story here. You should definitely expand this! Although I loved the ideas and scenes in the story, I ...

Hi :) I thought this piece was perfectly dark and had that beautiful mournful tone all the way through. You are a talented poet and I can tell that you ...

Hey there, me again! This was great, but I liked Envy more ;) There were just a few grammar mistakes but I really liked the ending. One thing that I ...