Tinalove

thx guys, appreciate all the help:)

Simplicity at its finest! Simple poetry with heavy meaning is my favorite kind. Your words rhyme nicely and the flow is nice. Keep up the good writing babe:)

very good writing, the words you chose were perfect to express what youre feeling. I sympathize with you as you clearly write your heart out here.

wonderful poem, good flow, love your diversity of words. great job hun, keep it up!

I like your choice of words. You've got a steady rhythm but your stanzas tend do go out longer than they should. Try to match your stanzas more, it will ...