TimmyJake

Woah. You have been busy with the likes. xD Thank you for both the reviews and all of the likes! c: hehe da rebel. Hm. I actually really like that ...

Thank youuu, Annie.

Just tuck this piece into your folders and come back to it when you're feeling daring. :p This dude gives a better explanation as to why you should hate adverbs ...

Zevi and Zoe are going to stick around for a while. I thinkkkk. I haven't written this novel in so long, I'm not sure what's going on anymore. xD I ...

The details are a killer for me. >> Especially that one about the kids all being the same. wait wut. xD I will have to go through and really really ...

ARC and basically all of Affinity is a mega-confusion trap for me now. >> I'm focused so much on my other book, the final editing and re-writes, that when I ...

I thought it was funny. You didn't have to go about fixing it! Yes, it was very helpful. :)

Thank you for this amazing review, Pretzel. It was very helpful, and prompts many of my future edits (the semi-colons were amended last night... any better?). The second half of ...

I did moreee editing last night (although I didn't have your review in front of me, so I didn't do some fixes. >>).... Any better? I have been writing this ...

The following chapter explains in more depth who the scrolvs are. Thank you for your comment! It'll help me solidify and explain things in future edits.

Basically, I used the semi-colons on a whim. Instead of figuring out how they work and using them, I think I'll work around them and delete their usage - figuring ...

I came online for a momeeent. :3 Yes, that helped bring his motives to life quite a bit. They're still a bit clouded over, but we have the basic idea ...

Livvyyyy So, yeah. This is another one of my trouble chapters. I think with Affinity, it's going to take a few drafts before everything is down pat (such as the ...

So odd to see this. >>

This review. ouch