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Re: The Happy Home
It does! Haha. I have two brothers that are 2 and 4, and they are SO busy! I know what you mean!! :)
Nov 30, 2013 -
Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus
Haha. Doesn't matter. You do great reviews. :)
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: The Spark - Ch. 2
Yep!! :)
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Just a milestone.
a comedy!!?
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus
Actually, when I read one part you were talking about, it was correct the way it was. When he is saying, "go...home." he isn't talking to them, but to himself. ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus
yep. You saw some stuff I missed. Thanks!
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: The Spark - Ch. 2
Wait a sec. They're from different districts! Oh! The two main characters. Makes sense now. Sorry, Iggy!
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: The Dragon's Sword
Hey Ballilared! Glad to see you here! I won't make a review on it as I have already done so, but I would make it about 1/10th shorter. People on ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Just a milestone.
Thanks! I HATE that first version myself.
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Just a milestone.
Alright! Good!!
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Warm as ice, chapter 1.
Oh! Haha. Got me there. I have a main character in my book that is a teen girl. I actually enjoy writing on her more than my other characters.
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: Warm as ice, chapter 1.
Very good! I also noticed that your main character is a girl... Usually that means that the author is a girl. For some reason I had the idea that you ...
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: The Spark - Ch. 2
I'm sorry. But I don't get it. The names are different in the second chapter!
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: The Spark - Ch. 2
Ah, ok! The name does sound hunger gamyish. I will read it.
Nov 28, 2013 -
Re: The Existence of God
Will do. Thanks!
Nov 28, 2013