TimmyJake

Ok, so why I chose clay was because it is something you build on. Soil and dirt could be anything, but clay is very specific. People build with it, so ...

Your welcome! And that does clear everything up for me!

Thanks for your review!! Very helpful

Thanks for your review!

Thank you Cheetah! Consider us Even now!!

Thanks! I have changed it to that. i thought it didn't look quite right! xD

Hmmm... I should explain that! Thanks for the review! The line means that it gives us a chance to show our metal... Perhaps I should change the line to that?

Thank you!

Thanks, SubtleSanity!

Thanks!

Thanks, Iggy! :D

Oh... you mean why is it the hardest... I want to make an impression, a real impression. One that just leaves the reader repeating the last paragraph over and over ...

You have pointed out so many errors, that's how! :d

Thanks! Part five is gonna be really tough. Always the hardest... I want to make it the best, though. So I am gonna take my time! :D Thanks for sticking ...

I did some editing! I haven't incorporated what you mentioned about him meeting his match, but don't worry. I shall! :D And soon! Thanks for your amazing review, Livvy!