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TimmyJake

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Writer's Block

    For having Writer's block, you can sure write well! :P Everything rhymes superrrr well. Each other one rhymes, right? The only thing that I can see are a few commas, ...

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Unbidden

    Your first Poem? Really? My first one sounded so stupid I was red in the face when my parents read it. Rip it apart? What an invitation! :P timmyjake here, ...

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Sirens, Sirens.

    I like the poem a lot! Some poems don't really make sense, and you can't really tell what the author is implying. With yours, you know what it is... But ...

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Seer - Chapter 1

    I think I agree with BenToomey. Your chapter should stay with one character, and then if you switch characters, you should make the prophets part longer and more descript. Grandma ...

    Nov 22, 2013


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein