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Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.2
Timmy has decided to join the party! And not late, this time. :P Wow, she really has to go through a lot, doesn't she? These terrorists aren't fooling. Whatever they ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: dfa
Timmy here for a review... You know, I fail to see the point of this... But I will nitpick everything, just as if it was a normal poem... My only ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: The Boastful Koalas
Timmy here, yet again! You have enough works to satisfy me for a while yet. :D Wow... What can I say that won't be mirroring the other reviewers? They have ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: The Lament to all my Laments
I have decided to give you yet another review. You review every piece I post, so I am determined to do it as well. :) Its tough, but I love ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Wanna Play A Game?
Timmy has decided to pollute this fine work with his worthless optimisms and tiny nitpicks. Wow, this work was... strange ... When I first began reading it, I thought I ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: The Rhymic Reunion and Drumming Disaster (12 days before Christmas) [Part 11] *Edited*
Timmy is here once again! I think with this review I will be caught up on these... Too bad. They are so much fun to read and review. :D I ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: The Musical Confrontation and the Decision [3] (Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Here I am.... To do a review! I wanted you to have the best. :D Soooo... Um, I don't know. ;) Oh. My. Goodness. Ben is a teddy? That was ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 5 Part 1 - A Card Game To Remember
Timmy here... Again. This looks like the last one. I made it! Wellll... not yet. :D Nitpicks make an evening meal for , seeing if he could not only make ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - Castor's Confrontation with Miles
Timmy here again for a review!! Nitpicks Kalan’s wrist was majorly higher than his hand I don't think that "majorly" is the right word for it.... Perhaps way? or something ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 1 - Running To Check On Kalan
Timmy here again for a review. I just skipped by the last one because of the reason I mentioned, but I will go back and review it if need be. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 3 Part 1 - A Stirred Pot
Timmy is here... again. I had to go to church, so it took me a while to get the next one out. :) Nitpicks first!! Miles approached Jeric who was ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Musical Confrontation and the Decision [2] (Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Timmy is here once again. Reds are going to triumph! They must! :D Nitpicks There was silence. “I’m the Spirit aren’t I? Comma after "spirit" Ben said suddenly, stepping forwards. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 2 Part 2 - An Invitation to Mount Crusto
Timmy here once again! I demand to review them all today! :D Nitpicks First, as usualll!!! Running through the woods quickly, Don't tell us that she ran through the woods ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 2 Part 1 - Traveler's Tavern Is a Riot
Timmy here!! Againnn.... When are your chapters gonna be over? I don't want to see the end of them. :) Nitpicks As the big wagon rolled up to building the ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 2 - The Brawl and Visitor
Timmy is here. Don't mind me. Twill only be a short moment. Nitpicks first, as usual!! What are you doing here Kalan?” Comma after "Kalan" “You shut up you little ...
May 25, 2014