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Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 1
Timmy here! Wow. I wasn't planning on reviewing any of your pieces in the deleted folder, simply because well, they were deleted! But here I am, and I am glad ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 8
Timmy here!! Okay, so this chapter doesn't have much I can nitpick. Seriously. It is definitely your best chapter yet, using the character's personalities to their full extent, employing every ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 37 (Revised)
Timmy here!! :D I have missed another day! Or was it just a morning... I forget. Anywho, here I am now, ready to kill review this piece. This chapter seems ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Stone Cold
Timmy here for a review! Yuss... I know its been a little while, and I am sowwy. But here I am now! To be honest, I didn't notice the Disney ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Trying: Chapter 3.2
Timmy here! Wow, he really turned out to be a different person than he appeared at first, didn't he? I think I kind of like Nico, even though he is ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: a rattlesnake by the watershed
Timmy here! Okay. Be prepared for short review, since I have no idea what to nitpick and this is too perfect to critique and I don't know what to say ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 35-36 (Revised)
Timmy here! Bleh. That entrance salutation is probably becoming quite... dull . I SHOULD LOOK FOR ALTERNATIVE METHODS OF INTRODUCTIONS! Yussss.... *coughs* Or not... Onto the review! She could use ...
Jul 26, 2014 -
Re: What Alex Said
Timmy here for a review! When I read this for the first time, I didn't think I would be able to review it. It is such a powerful piece, containing ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 32-34 (Revised)
Timmy here! he found himself in the center of the maze, in the round grassy area where the horse usually grazed. I didn't know you did poetry! hee-hee. Sorry, this ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 29-31 (Revised)
Timmy here! Ya know, sometimes I wonder about that Mr. Catcher... He seems like he is so much more than the average citizen of those parts. (hehe, used prim and ...
Jul 25, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 7
Timmy here! Hey, Forti! :D Sorry it took me so long to review this next chapter. I had a few review requests to take care of first, so yeah... But ...
Jul 24, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 6: Alive & Kicking
Timmy here! The first thing I am going to say is merely a comment, so don't worry. When you are writing a book, and you have a line of devoted ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 27-28 (Revised)
Timmy here! Erm, what can I say to this chapter? This is going to end up being a long list of comments, a glued together string of praises that I ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 4: Feel It All
Timmy here! I like this chapter a lot because it doesn't focus on their internal feelings as much, but focuses on the environment around them, and particularly the doctor. He ...
Jul 22, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 26 (Revised)
Timmy here! Can I just make a random comment and say that I am super happy you didn't describe the food at the Aquarium? I am hungry right now and ...
Jul 22, 2014