TimmyJake

Timmy heeeere! c: So I have come to the beginning of this, and I shall review all the way through until I am caught up! You snagged my attention in ...

Timmy heeeere Just to warn you ahead of time, don't expect anything great out of this review. I am hopeless when it comes to these odd things you post from ...

Timmy heeeere You just wrote your first 16+ chapter. o_o And it was loooovely. Just my first read through the piece tells me this is your best chapter in a ...

Timmy heeeeere So I believe I read some of this a while ago, and so the characters are familiar enough for me to comment on them if I see anything ...

Timmy heeeeere :3 I for one, while I find the healing scene very powerful and moving, the delivery wasn't as good as I know you can do. There was none ...

Timmy heeere :3 Oh, so you're back to the normal length of your chapters - good . This part was so sad, because it's basically giving us how she feels ...

Timmy heeeere! Because I haven't read any previous chapters (there's only one, but still), I won't be looking at the plot side of thing as much. I'll point something out ...

I AM HERE. I HAVE COME O_o I just broke a pattern I've had for the past five hundred reviews. Now I'm lost. Okay okay okay - just breatheee. I ...

Timmy heeere This will be a quick review because the other reviewers have already taken so much, and helped you so much - I'm left with just some odd comments. ...

Timmy heeere So this is a different kind of chapter. I can see a different side of Asenath in this - something which had always lingered in the background before, ...

Timmy heeeere. :3 Woah. O_o So much happens in this later part, and Avril is separated from Naomi - wut wut. That part was so sad, and you wrote it ...

Timmy heeere :3 So I am noticing a bit of change in Joseph's character as we go along. He always seemed to be the most steady of everyone in the ...

Timmy heeeere This will be a short review since there isn't much for me to say. xd This piece is pretty near perfect as it stands, and I have about ...

Timmy heeere HIS NAME IS KAI AND I LOVE IT I like the length of this chapter, because you haven't shortened them to fit into one posting - but rather, ...

Timmy heeeeere :3 A bit late, but I am here now so you can keep your complaints to yourself and just accept that I'll be late every time because I ...