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Re: The post-perpetual world - Kannan
Coming here before my YWS snoozing session during the week. ;) The first two sentences are perfect. In fact, they may be my favorite sentences you've written so far in ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: The post-perpetual world -Ning
Timmy hereee! As one of the commenters below stated, I love the fact that her family is woven so tightly into her life - and the usage of those different ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 48
Timmy hereee Still going to be reviewing this novel - one of my few continuing projects in my absence. Haven't reviewed in a week. *crosses fingers* Let's see how I ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: Halfway
I'm a bit late to this party. >< MEH. Hopefully this doesn't become a thing. I'm going to attempt to write a review for this, but I don't know how ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Tainted Skies 2.3
Timmy hereee I'm not seeing sizes of anything. There are things in writing we don't have to describe the size of as often, such as Sky doesn't need any description ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 5.2
Timmy hereee! You write too many books So I am here to review the last remaining chapter I'm behind on. Yayyyy, now I am caught up save for your poetry ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Tainted Skies 2.2
Timmy hereee! So now I realize just how much I am behind. o.o I think... I may be reviewing your pieces for a while now. YAY. I need more of ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 48.
Timmy hereeee Now this... this was perfect. The ending of the last chapter told me the narrator would be you directly in this one, and it proved me right (I ...
Feb 21, 2015 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 47.
Timmy hereee Rease was in English again, for the last time Hm. Me no likey. This tells the reader that something bad is going to happen - like death or ...
Feb 21, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 47
Timmy here! I'm going to be a sort of decent follower and catch this work while it's still hot off the press. Has happened before, long ago.... I forget when. ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 46
Timmy here! Sorry for not showing up earlier as I promised last week as I should be. I've been so lazy these past few weeks, and probably will end up ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 3
Timmy hereee The plot thickens (I've wanted to say that for so longgg), and now we're seeing a standoff. YAY. I love those, because they're so lively - but yet ...
Feb 13, 2015 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 46.
I FOUND IT I HAVE FOUND IT. Sorry I am a few days late. My only excuse is that I've been lazy and got a sudden amount of review requests. ...
Feb 12, 2015 -
Re: As The World Falls
Timmy hereeee This will be a short review as there isn't much to say, really. The piece is well thought out, and evokes quite a bit of thought. I like ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: A Realistic View on Life
Timmy heeere :3 So I'll attempt another review at your lyrics here. I've been doing more lyric and poetry reviewing in the past few days, so here's hoping that has ...
Feb 11, 2015
