TimmyAlly

Hey, this is Timmy and I am to review your piece. I find the concept somewhat interesting, but to be completely honest I had no idea what was going on ...

I like the whole concept of the piece, but I feel as if you could do so much more with the. The entire flow of the piece, I feel, was ...

I liked the overall concept of your story. The idea that he had the power to fix something, perfect it even, that the society around him thought were impossible. It ...