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Re: Watching Sheep
Oh already the beginning is so sad. With someone unable to contact there family, espc with this line here: “Not after all I’ve done, all that’s been done to me.” ...
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Re: Chapter 1 L.E.G.I.O.N
So since I’m going through the Green Room, I will not read or comment on the previous chapters. But knowing your style, this will probably be marked down for me ...
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Re: Chapter two
Well so far I’ve found almost all NSFW scenes boring, so let’s see if you can convince me otherwise =D I wish you wouldn’t start with saying that Merci is ...
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Re: Short and spooky Scream poems! (Scream 1996)
Alrighty, more poems in this folder. I can do this. And they are funny this time. First one had me chuckle =D Second one had a harder chuckle. So far, ...
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Re: Answer the phone? 💀📞🔪
Decided to review some more today so Hi there again =D Just a quick question, is it supposed to be “killed” or actually “killer” here? “ based off the main ...
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Re: A letter between us
Hey friendos! Awesome seeing you two collab (less awesome that it’s a poem and I’ll feel like I can’t really help! But regardless, I shall do my best!) Okay, I ...
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Re: Kelly’s origin: The Laurence family’s deepest woes
Ah alright, I think I will finish this folder now. Alright, this is the girl that Tyler eventually chooses over Eleanor, right. Sometimes you have these… redundant bits in your ...
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Re: Thatcher's Remembrance on Reagan
Okay, I wish you would have given us any clue on what exactly you want us to do with this essay. Was this for school? The paragraphing is all over ...
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Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, USA: Part Two
Ah alright so we get the context to Lilliana now. Here goes. I want to know what my fav sceptic found out abt the supernatural! ….and woah, what a… what ...
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Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, USA: Part One
I like the beginning of this. I like how you set the scene and immediately show us the problem of your MC :3 I like Lilliana’s tenacity. I like that ...
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Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Three
Hmm my thought for this part is actually[and I love how this will sound]: Do the cannibals get to leave this area after they can acquire a full set of ...
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Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Two
Okay, let’s find out what’s deeper than hell ;) Hmmm I somehow need to think of the soul room from Soul Eater. Maybe it’s the velvet. And the piano… I ...
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Re: Alexandria: Bone Boy
I like the way Alexandria describes her memories :3 Gives me a fuzzy feeling too! Oh and I like that Frank’s so understanding and goes along with it! I think ...
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Re: Emberlynn and Juniper’s deaths
Annd final story in this folder (for now)! Oh and we are back to Circe and her twisted self. Oh nonono, run girls run. That is … that is certainly ...
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Re: When Halloween is over
Feels like you published this at the perfect time of year and here I am, like a month too late xd And if that is’t a traumatizing thing to hear: ...
Dec 3, 2025
