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Re: Chapter One: Donut Crumbs 1.2
Alright, the dice chose this over 15 other options =D Hi Lady, as promised, I have come for your story. And I kinda hope that this is the right one ...
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Re: Delirium - Chapter 1
The dice have spoken and chosen the first chapter of Delirium for me to read 😊 Let’s head straight in! And my first thought is… that you could be more ...
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Re: The Hope of a Kingdom
Good evening, Messenger 😊 Felt like doing a final review today and I like focusing on stories so much more than focusing on poems ^^ Hmm I already feel like ...
Jan 5 -
Re: Chapter One: Rule Number One: Don't Hack Your School Network. Or If You Do, Don't Get Caught.
Hi SanaPathan, I have so many things I want to read now that my Green Room work has winded down that I resorted to rolling dice. Congratz, the dice chose ...
Jan 5 -
Re: Lovers in Blue
Hey Alex 😊 A short story is much more up my alley =D Hm I find it a bit strange that we are talking about celestial objects and then you ...
Jan 5 -
Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 2- The Date
Alright, what a warning ^^° Here we go. But first, grammar. I cannot help myself. Something’s wrong with this sentence: “the sound of people laughing and talking filled the air, ...
Jan 4 -
Re: Surrender
Oh does that mean the sun? "The marble has gotten colder" That's a really nice metaphor! Remember that you need a dash for bone-deep :) Annd we're at the TW ...
Jan 3 -
Re: Winter Crush
Hi Alex, I wanted to take a look at your poem and so here I am :3 Hm here’s how my process went: from the first 4 lines: school crush? ...
Jan 2 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Prologue
I am so sorry, but I didn’t realise there’s also a prologue. Why are you so confusing YWS Q_Q Oh Marin and Sugei are siblings. I …somehow never registered that! ...
Jan 1 -
Re: Delirium (The Prelude)
Okay first review of the new year and who could I review other than you ? Happy New Year Ravena :3 Also I so did not expect the style of ...
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Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 2
Decided it is time for more Garnets. Here we go =D I like that callback =D “that was the size of his actual second cousin that was twice removed.“ Hm ...
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Re: Chapter 4: The apartment
Ah I remember the previous chapter. Something about Minna and a Ghoul! Shouldn’t it be “li’l ol’ me” with these apostrophes? I like the way Simon speaks and also that ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Prologue
Hey Ravena, it’s been a looong while. But I have finally settled down enough to read the first work in the TFR folder! I already like that you call it ...
Dec 29, 2025 -
Re: Death of a Showgirl: Taylor Swift, Womanhood, and Labor Production
Time for another essay review 😊 Hmm I don’t think I understand what you mean with . Is this talking about quantity? Like a certain quantity of A is worth ...
Dec 29, 2025 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 11
Oh I am afraid of this summary. Let’s… cautiously proceed. Sera coming out swinging this chap, huh? Sera wished that the ball would just disappear to wherever Kyle’s net-stick and ...
Dec 29, 2025
