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Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 1
Hia Gengar (love the name btw!) I came here bc Spearmint said that she’s got the idea abt linking the previous and the next chapter at the end of your ...
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Re: Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.
Hey Moth, have come for your story finally =D Hmmmm if the prose and grammar are not the best… and you say that right at the beginning… I am already ...
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Re: Peonies in December
Ladida, remembered our talk in the chat. Looks like just talking to me for a bit is enough for me to check out more of your stuff xd I really ...
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Re: The Boy from Brooklyn (marvel one-shot)
I like the beginning a lot, it's a smooth entrance to your story and very easy to read. Got an immediate feel for the situation your characters are in :) ...
Dec 17, 2025 -
Re: Consistency (In The Apocalypse?) - Chapter One
*reads TWs* Alrighty, this is gonna be a rough one huh? But hey some of these are what I would seek out on my own, so here goes. Uhhh why ...
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Re: Tales from New Kakari: Remy (pt. 2)
Hi yosh. Coming in with a bit of a writing tip first. I feel like starting with three lines of dialogue all with a dialogue tag… makes the third one ...
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Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 1
Ah duped! We get assassin number 2 as our next POV! Before I continue, wanted to say that I love the bg of JazzicusMaximus’ profile. More than meets the eye~ ...
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Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Prologue
Well, good thing I searched for this in the Books tab instead of just reading it from Spearmint’s portfolio. Otherwise, I’d have started with Ch1 instead of this prologue! And ...
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Re: Six Minutes To Dawn
I was immediately intrigued by your summary 😊 The name Constellation in conjunction with being the last human? Hear we go! *turns on the recommended music bc why not* Also ...
Dec 16, 2025 -
Re: Dead Flowers
I’m still looking for a short story to add to the awards, so I’ll be reading a few, even if they are out of the Green Room ^^ Already like ...
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Re: I Remember, I Remember Certain Things
Alrighty. Congraz on your first post and welcome to this site 😊 First thing first: you should take heed of your very first sentence and yours is already rly confusing. ...
Dec 16, 2025 -
Re: She Was a Girl
Ok idk why but I’m struggling with long-form text today, so I am back for a review for you 😊 I like the way you say this: “her eyes held ...
Dec 15, 2025 -
Re: Writing from a Desk in the Dark: Chapter 12
Hi Orion, you might want to make sure that the chapters are all in order in your folder. It's a bit hard to click through them (checked the recent ones ...
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Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screen Play Assignment (Scenes 11-12)
Ach Tao. You don’t understand. I don’t want you to explain things in post, I want your screenplay to give the explanations xd Nobody forces you to publish the scenes ...
Dec 15, 2025 -
Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screen Play Assignment (Scenes 9-10)
Hmm it is late and I am tired. But I kinda wanna read on. So here I am. What is the difference between “being taken there” and “being placed here”? ...
Dec 14, 2025
