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Re: ~Other World~ (Prologue)
Good afternoon ^^ After a string of poems, it’s time for a story :3 Oh that is such a cool line: “You do not have the power to calm the ...
Feb 11 -
Re: The gift in their eyes
Good afternoon ^^ It’s shaping up to be a very poem-heavy day for me. I was very intrigued by your summary! “when love shows up where blood goes thin,” why ...
Feb 11 -
Re: a river running
Good morning! Review Day is nearly upon us but that is no reason to shirk regular reviews and this is why I’m here! Summary already sounds very wholesome ^^ I ...
Feb 11 -
Re: A Choice
Hia Rebel, since I just read Alex' Social Week poem, I thought to myself: Why not continue to the trend? =D Oh I love the phrasing with holding ground for ...
Feb 11 -
Re: Little Chick
Don't tell anyone that I forgot to put this on the Google Sheet =D Shhh, I will rectify the error and immediately review it instead XD I love how you ...
Feb 11 -
Re: Spark of the Rebellion Chapter 9: A candid conversation
Good afternoon! I remember this story, and it’s good that you finally posted another chapter ^^ Finally came up in my Green Room random generator! Since your last chapter has ...
Feb 10 -
Re: The kola from which they grew (Prologue)
Good afternoon! I must say, your writing style is very solid 😊 I felt very engaged and in the moment, very atmospheric. Maybe a slight overuse of adjectives but it ...
Feb 10 -
Re: Apparent are your sins quatrain
Alrighty! I wish I had half as many things to say as lalalucky did for this but rest assured that I'm trying my best! I already really like the structure ...
Feb 10 -
Re: Chapter 4.5
Hi RatHat! I couldn’t wait any longer so let’s check out chapter 4.5 XD And also let’s see if it mitigates all the grievances I had with chapter 4 😊 ...
Feb 9 -
Re: The War of the Worlds, Cards, and Legos [Ch. VIII, Nine]
Alrighty. New day new Nine =D I really appreciate Six describing the room. I can overlook that it doesn’t really sound like her voice because I’m just so happy we’re ...
Feb 8 -
Re: Lightbulb
Good afternoon! I’m happy you started writing a book! So let’s get right into it. I already like the main character’s name 😊 Ari is such a cool pick! I ...
Feb 8 -
Re: Narcissus bulb verse
Hia, decided to try my hand at another poem today! And ofc my first thoughts start spiraling around "Can you make mead out of narcissus flowers?" That said I quite ...
Feb 7 -
Re: the mourning routine of a grieving person
Hio, I am prepared to cry. Let’s begin. I love the way you phrased this here: “to this imaginary conversation you’ve been writing since the moment he left.“ And I ...
Feb 6 -
Re: Paadruman, The Tales of Farting [Ch. VII, Nine]
*reads the summary* *big sigh* Alright. It feels like it’s been forever since I read a Nine chapter xd …where are we at the moment? Last chapter ended with Six ...
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Re: Syboleth ch. 1: A New Friend
Well at long last we have come to this. Hia Aet! Glad to finally see some sorta ch1 then xd “Damn. Chapter one got hands.” LOL First thought on the ...
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