Tikaya

First of all, I really like the urgency you present in the first few paragraphs. And again, I'm drawn to your characters, both because of their thoughts and also, well, ...

I wish you would have given some direction of what feedback you want? That makes it always a bit easier :) Sometimes I feel so uncultured, I don't understand why ...

Now after the first story, I had to see if there is another one with that creepypasta character and here I have found it :) Especially her friends, because misbehaving ...

Woah, my first thought was, six and she already had some sort of channel online?? Maybe I am too old for the young writers but that seems so early to ...

Now I'm jealous of that other reviewer bc they've figured out how to do the fancy quotation marks. Eventually, I will know too =D Also, you have a huge backlog ...

I know I haven't read the other parts of the story but I found it sad that this has been left in the Green Room for so long! And hey, ...

I read the wikipedia article of Virginia Woolf just recently. Thank you for sharing your poem about her! While poetry is not my usual style of fiction, I still really ...

I quite enjoyed the beginning part of the story. I felt like I could follow well along the MC's thoughts and it was easy to get invested. "I try to ...

I like the "spider-webbing her eyes with crimson lines" that sounds really poetic! In general it feels like you have a few really neat phrases in there, some nice bits ...