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Re: Unfortunately, in order for something good to happen, you must work abysmally hard for it
I love how they decide to talk about the plan after they are already executing the plan. That's... so typical child-like =D Oh wow , never mind. Bart is that ...
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Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part One
Hi hello, one more review from me :) I feel like here all your creativity is at play and has all the high notes from your usual style. Again, the ...
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Re: Chapter Six: Survival training
Forgot to mention it in the other review but: Nova is a hacker, yes! Keypad is basically her home turf, right??? I get the feeling I'm about to find out ...
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Re: Chapter Five: The Secret
Had to continue reading, your characters felt so alive. I like how taciturn Uncle Max is. I'm still missing the context on exactly what type of training they are doing ...
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Re: Marble Hornets amusement park ad!
Well of course this is a monstrous ad but I was really in the mood for it and you sold the horror park really well. It did feel like an ...
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Re: Chapter Four: Training, Part Two: Axe Murder Edition
Okay, hi! Since I'm working my way through the Green Room, I'm starting with this chapter and I must say, I LOVE the way you head into it! I love ...
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Re: Where Secrets Hide [Chapter 3]
Hi hello, will do a quick review of the other chapter you've posted. And can I just say that the magical elements are deepening? I can really feel for Zara ...
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Re: Where Secrets Hide] Part 2
Ah there the "I" missing in the first sentence ^^° Alright, I skimmed the first chapter to be ready for this so here we go. Last time, we got a ...
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Re: Tueur’s origin: Souls and Roses 🪦🌹
I swear, anytime I sit down to read, something happens. pushes well-meaning cat away Oh that is an interesting concept: he had grown interested in the dead, so his body ...
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Re: Ava Luxrose’s story-Zombies of Mariesville
I don't know why but when I read about a magic girl with pink hair, I immediately thought of Elfenlied @.@ I remember that the inevitibilty of the Elfenlied girls ...
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Re: ******
Hi hello, nice to meet someone new in the Green Room =D I'm not in the habit of reading Author's Note, I don't like spoilers but maybe it's the formatting, ...
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Re: “Entry despair”
Oh wow, I haven't watched the series but I still feel like this poem captured the essence of it, or at least of something horrific. I really like the way ...
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Re: the distance was never enough
I love the formatting of the story (and also the font). Some observations: we were stupid, then. greedy. The period here feels deliberate and adds emphasis! rag doll through endless ...
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Re: Alanna helps Caden [Part Three]
Okay had to read this too before I pause reviewing for now. Also that answers the question of what Alanna intents to do when she shows up at Adonis' place. ...
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Re: Niko, you kind young girl 🌸✨
I like that this poem feels ... very gentle. From word choice and also from the flow. It feels like Niko tried so hard but failed someone or something in ...
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