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And another one from this folder! Hm the name Victoria is familiar…Right she was one of the Life Seekers who defected! I remember! Aha and I also remember a different ...

Next one in line! First thought, why the dash in front of specks in the first sentence? Also a bit soon to get so much description of the MC without ...

Okay, starting this with the final part. My apologies. Also not even sure if this is even in the Green Room but it has only 1 Review and so you ...

Ah that sandwich sounds delicious. Now I want one too… Oh that is such an interesting description: The sky was a misty blue, like the lace curtains Mom liked in ...

Next one from the folder! And I immediately recognize those names. Here goes, the story of how Terrace felt about Elanor and eventually, how he died by her hand as… ...

Okay let’s get to a new folder :) Hmmm I feel like… Nothing really happened in his story? Yes Peyton had a bad dream and it had some really nice ...

Okay, right to Shirley’s story after this. I’m trying to work folder by folder now! Another recent work so expect more complains about dialogue formatting xd [The beatings will continue ...

Okay I have a few more reviews in me for today. Let’s do this. Interesting that Crimson thinks of this as “giving herself” friends instead of making them. Says something ...

I have a lot of thoughts about the essay in general so to have a proper review have some thoughts on the writing first. "They did not have many regulations. ...

Okay, again reached the most recent part of the folder 😊 Haha! I knew it! He’s not human and boring. No wonder Connie is interested! Let’s go! And also no ...

I like Poppy’s confidence in her skills to handle this unknown threat. But still I find her lack of caution alarming. Hopefully this goes well.. Hm I feel like you ...

Alright this follows off directly after “The Interesting Man”, right? Hmm Connie wanted Poppy to meet this person and now… It appears that he’s some kinda monster. Possibly vampire? Since ...

Creeeperrr, this is a really recent story. If I have no impact but you formatting dialogue correctly, I shall view my time on this site spent well. “Hey there, handsome ...

Let’s see what Luke’s deal from last scene was all about. If he says they don’t need to worry … but the rest of the paragraph feels like he’s worried ...

I like that we’re dealing with characters that used to be under mind control and are actually considered “weak”. I’m so used to iron-willed, determined characters that I’m curious to ...