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Re: To my dear "Friend" Writers Block *Way Edited*
Dry spell, dry spell, go away! Don’t come back, any other I think 'another' could go well here day! You tease me with your ways giving me just a line ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Over the Music
Tiger here to review per request! Comments will be in bold . Oh, and welcome back from your sabbatical! That night that not really necessary the music played I turned ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Tiger here to review per request and friendly neigbour-liness. Or you could just call that interest. Anyway, comments, as always, shall be in bold . CYSM.jpg Liam Wynne okay, this ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One- Not Here
The night was full of bruises Bruises? Maybe you could use another word, like shadows or something . The f resh blues and purples of street corner shadows, fading greens ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: The Voice In My Head
Tiger here to review! Comments shall be in bold . Not sure where I should post this, so I just went for Other. :) Any thoughts and critiques are much ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: White Eyes (part one)
Tiger here to review per request! Comments shall be in bold . Prologue It is cold and dark. Where am I? The trees close in about her like faceless wraiths. ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
Tiger here to review per request. Comments will be in bold . Disclaimer: review may be HARSH. (Pt. 1) I - Paradoxes It was a dull afternoon in late autumn ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Saturday Mornings *Edited*
Tiger here to review per request. Comments will be in bold . The cold woke my lukewarm body, set my heart pounding and my organs quivering; Maybe you should put ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Dark
Tiger here to review per request. Comments will be in bold , and because this is poetry most of them will be just that: comments. Not necessarily corrections. Dark, dark, ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Luna 1
Alright, Tiger here to review per request! Comments will be in bold . 1. Reunion The woman was close; Asha could feel it. Finally. She had been searching for almost ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Igneous Rock Prologue [[edited!]]
Tiger here to review per request! First of all, let's get down to the nitpicks/ corrections/ mistakes (whatever you prefer to call it, really). “It’s the last day of school, ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: When The Moon is Bigger Than The Sun
When the moon is bigger than the sun, A noise will whisper in your ear, I like these first two lines. I really like these first two lines. A shadow ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Foretold (Prolouge +Chapter 1)
Right, this is Tiger here to review; comments will be in bold. Foretold PART ONE Prolouge Before we even get into the story, this should be 'Prologue', for there isn't ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: A poem on the general stupidness of the human race.
Ebony skin In ivory halls. White dusty faces. Hope aganist against all odds. Sweet, sweet surrender, in bloody walls. Fight for freedom, or nothing at all. Yellow stars, in scarlet ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: I wish the words would come.
Sorry about the late review, I kept reading it through then going to write the next chapter of my novel before I reviewed. Anyway, I'm here now. :) Why won't ...
Nov 6, 2010