TigerShaard

First Off, Welcome to YWS! You seem like you will be a good addition to the community. Second off, I love this. There are a few grammatical errors, and definitely ...

OMG! This is freakin awesome! Didn't catch many nitpicks, your grammar and spelling seem pretty good, and I love your writing style. It flows, and draws me in. Please post ...

You know how much I love this story, my dear friend! You shouldn't break it up! But it is your choice. I didn't catch any nitpicks, though im sure the ...

The way this flows is interesting. I haven't ever seen you write this way Spiral, totally new and original. Maybe not for you, but for me it is. Anyways, I ...

When I saw that this was long, I instantly wanted to read it. I read fast, and I like things that can keep me occupied. This was fantastic. I was ...

Sooo, Spiral strikes again. The only thing I caught was "hopeles" should be "hopeless" Use your spell check girl! All in all, it did draw me in, and I can't ...

Hey Spiral! As usual, magnificent. Poems don't need description, it could be a jumble of words, as long as it means something. I love it, its truly remarkable, and seems ...

Hey Forest! This piece is cute...but it doesn't seem to be going anywhere. I was interested about it at first, wondering what was gonna happen, but it soon got a ...

Oooo, this is very good, if you have more I would like to see it. It drew me in, I was curious the whole time. You are a good writer. ...

Aww, this made me sad :( It's a cute story, and I didn't really expect the fight, but then, I guess thats why I liked it lol. They pretty much ...

I really liked this, honestly i don't understand why everyone is making a big deal. It drew me in, and though it wasn't completely explained, i really enjoyed it, it ...