TigerShaard

I always love your poems so much, they're always so beautifully written..I really loved the first stanza, but then all the rest of it as well for your wordplay. Bravo ...

I loved this! The only nitpicks I have is, as the girl above me said, the line does make her sound a bit self-centered upon first reading. in the seventh...stanza?...'your' ...

The rhyming was good and easy to read, with a fantastic flow to it. The only problem, though it isn't really a problem, is that it doesn't explain anything really. ...

Hey Matt, I really liked this, especially the emotion. Whenever I read your poems, I get this sense of someone sculpting, steadily building up this fantastic work of art. Or ...

Wow, so first of all I have to say i REALLY like this. Second, I was confused by the random references to a Yuui? Not sure what that was about, ...

The emotion in this piece...It's incredible. Very easy to understand, clear tone and even though it's rather depressing, the power of the desperation is touching... I really enjoyed reading this, ...

Honestly, I think this was wonderful. I got that feeling of reading an old masters poetry, if that makes any sense. I like the "(of time)" that the person above ...

This story is just so awesome, i love the way you've built up the characters. They all have their own adorable personalities. I can't really offer a review right now, ...

Though it is short, It's powerful. I would have liked it longer, but hey, I write poetry and I know how it gets. For something thrown quickly together, I really ...

I just have to say, wow. Five trillion times wow. This literally made me cry, thats how moving it was. I've got two younger sisters, but I remember when the ...

Aw, I really like this. Is there more, or is this simply a short story type of thing? I would definitely read more if there was any, haha. Anyways, I ...

Oh man, You must PM me when you post more. This is the best thing I've read on here in a while, and I loved it! I read the whole ...

I just gotta say, I'm loving this little story you got goin on. It's funny, and it holds my attention. I don't really have a review, you're very good at ...

I liked this, simple as it was. Like Griffinkeeper said above me, the order could be changed. Oh and this bit I had a slight problem with: "In one graceful, ...

I like it, it has a truth to it. The rhythm seems a bit broken, but I think you were going for it. When I read it aloud it has ...