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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Immoral Love

    Yeah, everyone's been pointing out the commas haha. I knew its grammatically incorrect, but I was trying to create an effect which obviously wasn't successful. xD Thanks for the review! ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Voices

    Sometimes it good to just let it flow randomly. You end up with interesting pieces like this.

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Heartless Pleasure

    Yeah, I do see your point. :) Thanks for the advice! I'm a little rusty (first piece in a few years).

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Heartless Pleasure

    Thank you very much for your advice! I'm still a little rusty but definitely good advice and I'll take it. :)

    Apr 25, 2015


And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains.
— Percy Bysshe Shelley