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Hey i like this poem alot, but i agree with everyone else. This would be much better if it was longer and had more mood. If you can explain love ...

Hey I loved this poem you wrote, its interesting and creative. The imagry was really good, and the writing style kept me on edge. Kepp up the excellent work, i ...

Wow this is such a good piece of writing. You style is so unique and interesting that i couldn`t stop reading it

I`m actually going to keep this as my beginning, because i need to add to it more, and make it more rounded and explanitory. So once I start explaining things ...

I love the idea you had for the beginning, how did you think of it?