Tiaradyson

I will defiantly work on my errors, I think you did a great way in explaining why I shouldn't have down that. Thank you for that.

Thanks for that, I guess I did abuse the comma too much lol ^_^

That was very helpful, and the delicious bash part came from Napoleon Dynamite. You've seen the movie right? I don't know, when He said it. It just sounded cool, so ...

That was perfect help, and I was worried if I add two chapters together. No one would read this chapter, so I kept it short. But thank you.

That's so funny :D

*bag

I thought it was Game of Thrones lol XD

This makes sense now, "They would for certain, not get past that thing unnoticed." I just read it incorrectly

wyatt didn't screw up, ehhhh he wanted to go back and warn them. That a man from the future would go and hunt them down. I'm truly sorry I was ...

I am sorry that was extremely rude of me.

Maybe if you read from the beginning you wouldn't be so lost... just a guess.

Sometimes personal preferences are needed

last message: ehhh the warehouse was mentioned in the last chapter, can you tell me if I need more detail for that?

Is it good that my character doesn't change behaviors?

Got it, I can do that