ThundahKnuckles

Goodness! This was freakin' great! I plan to have a certain Grammar Nazi I know read this. Since you said English isn't your first language, I thought I'd help you ...

This is one well done piece of work. The way you wrote this made it feel like it was being retold by an elderly woman with a New Orleans accent. ...

Wow. Such strong emotions are packed into a relatively small piece of work. The writing is fantastic, to say the least. If you hadn't added the part about Ms. Mulberry ...

First of all, great job making all those separate items come together. The final product mirrors the concepts quite well. The arm closest to us an issue though. The muscles ...

Such a heart-rending piece. Very dark, heavy, and full of the sad truths that everyone knows, yet chooses to ignore. Reading the first few lines, I'm reminded of a certain ...

I can certainly relate to wanting to be all of the best traits. I wasn't a big fan of Disney movies, but fairy tales come in many forms. The imagery ...

This story really embraces the old idiom "People are changed by their world; rarely vise-verse". Here you have a really good guy, it's even in his name. But his world ...

Wow. I can tell this was written straight from the mind and heart. This piece impacted me heavily. It was kind of like a knife, in a way. Short yet ...

The plot of this story is quite imaginative. I wouldn't think that air is the mortal enemy of candy. Conceptually, you have an interesting thing going here. Personally, I would ...