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I'll try my best to heed to your advice. I guess I'll rewrite it. Anyway, thanks for the review!

Thanks. I thought I had spaced my work, but on posting it hadn't. My punctuation was intentional, though. Anyway, thanks for the review.

Haha! Thanks! I mostly get my imagination from novels and cartoons.

Hi! Great spelling and grammar. I see no problem with your punctuation. Great story. The fox and her slyness. Haha, and you used, "...the quick brown fox jumped over the ...

Hi! Great work! Superb poem! Love the format used! Especially when it comes to the words in bracket Ooh...and good work with the spelling! Just thinking it would be better ...

Nice work! Short, but nice. "I am time But you are the clock" Haha! Metaphoric, really loved that part. Hope I get to read others, though it seems I'll have ...

Thank you. Though, how do I use adjectives to spice up my work?

Hi! Great poem...great story, and one great title. What makes me love it is that it is pretty clear but at the same time not too detailing...plus I love the ...