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Threnody

  • Short Story » Horror, Narrative Re: How to Break a Bridge

    I understand the confusion, I was just stating my intentions with the knowledge that my readers were having trouble understanding them. ;)

    Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:14 pm
  • Short Story » Horror, Narrative Re: How to Break a Bridge

    Hi! Thanks for the review, it was very helpful. I definitely had it in my head that they were zombies or some sort of diseased people. Also, a lot of ...

    Thu Aug 02, 2012 3:15 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Gates

    Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...

    Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:02 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Gates

    Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...

    Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:02 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Gates

    Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...

    Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:01 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Gates

    Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...

    Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:01 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Gates

    Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...

    Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:01 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Gates

    Hey lady, thought I'd take you up on your offer for a character sketch! For one, I thought this was a really good piece and I have next to nothing ...

    Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:01 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, Historical Fiction Re: A Long Time Ago

    Oh, oops, sorry about this! I'm still getting used to this weird review process. ;)

    Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:30 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, Historical Fiction Re: A Long Time Ago

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    Hello! I really like the concept of this poem and I feel like it's extremely relevant. I just have a few comments to make. > I'm kind of interested in ...

    Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:29 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rise

    Thanks so much for taking time to review this, I can't believe I didn't catch the "the" after rereading it over and over again. XD I love using ellipses. I ...

    Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:55 am
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The princess girl

    Hi. I'm Forever Threnody, okay, let's start with your review. I love blue princess dresses! Oooh a knife... ooh... scary. Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

    Tue May 26, 2009 3:31 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Tell Him

    Hi everyone, thanks for the reviews. >>> Nope, not yearning. Just stating a prominent fact of life that people are mean to others because they're afraid that by being with ...

    Mon Apr 20, 2009 9:47 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I love you

    I love you, More than a match, Loves it's spark. • Yeah, you're just missing the "s" I adore you, More than a man, adore s his life. • The ...

    Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:27 pm
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Suggestions Needed!

    No, I meant a A Northern Light. Look it up. It's a good book. Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~ Forever Threnody

    Sun Mar 29, 2009 6:44 pm


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