Thorns-and-Roses

This kind of reminded me of the famous 'Ten Things I Hate about You' poem. Short and sweet. It's the kind of poem where a lot of people, even if ...

Hi, my main advice in this is just that you should probably try to make things just a little more simple and cut down on sentences or break them up ...

Really really good! It completely drew me in- and I find it hard to get pulled into stories on the internet to read them through so it must be good. ...

Well, I think all the corrections have already been pointed out so I will do some encouraging! I fall in love with the wind. Absolutely loved in. Since we don't ...

I really like the beginning. (Like everyone else has said, but it's true.) I think it foreshadows more than just the obvious of a body conscious person but also the ...

Suddenly, with a soft groan, Edward lifted me up off him and so softly pushed me, so I was lying on my back . Edward put his lips to my ...

He was dying and he embraced his death like a long lost friend. That one sentence really hit me. Death isn't usually something people embrace, usually something that people shy ...