Thisislegacy

Thanks for the review. I wrote this quickly and I will revisit it.

This did help. I wrote it quickly and I will go back and use better vocabulary.

Thank's for the review. I will let you know if I make a second part. I didn't intend to have this read as a suicide note but that perspective is ...

You're welcome. I'm glad that you changed the title. It makes much more sense now.

Thanks for the review. I will work on that. This work I haven't done anything to for a year and I feel like it needed some changed but I didn't ...

I had them split up before I published it. I don't know what happened.

You're fine. I originally wrote this to be like a rap in the early hours of the morning (like 2 am). Of course that isn't what happened. It sounds nice ...