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Ok, thanks so much for all the critique guys! Ya'll are SO awesome. Now, I kinda want to clear up an issue that some of you have mentioned. This is ...

Thanks! I'll do that. :)

Thanks so much for the critique everyone! :)

Thank you all SOOOOO much for the reviews. Yeah, I will get around to editing soon, but I've got finals ALL week, so I doubt I'll get to it before ...

I love this, it's a great Easter (or anytime) poem. My favorite line is the love your executioner line. Powerful. Sorry I couldn't be more helpful, this is just too ...

Oh, thank you! You're so nice! Hey, check out the RPG I started. It's called Elementals RPG. :) (sorry about the advertising)

Thanks everybody! If you guys want to see the photomanipulation I made for this poem go to: Thanks for the crit, all of you. You're all so great. :)

Thanks you guys! Yeah, I wasn't really thinking to much about rhyming or much of anything, I really do need to revise this. I'll take into account everything you guys ...

Oh, thanks so much, both of you! I'm literally bouncing right now. *squeals!* :) -Elise