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Wow...I love it. It's sooooooooooooooooo........wonderful. It REALLLY captures the feel of the whole holocaust theme... My favorite lines were: What to call this, This dreadful, devil madness. idk why

Oooooh....this is so sweet and sad. I love it. The phrasing is very soft and delicate, and it makes it very childish, which adds to the sweetness. It reminds me ...

Hi! I'm Elise, and I want to say I loved this! It reminds me SOOOO much of my hometown! You captured the heart of a small town perfectly. :) I ...

I love this. I seriously love it. I love the fact that your guy isn't a perfect prince of a person (like the ones in my poems usually are) and ...

Oh wow. That is beautiful. It has such truth to it. I love it. The last stanza was awesome. Your imagery is BEAUTIFUL. I love it. I really can't find ...

I love this, just for the sole reason that you mentioned Corey and Topanga. I thought NOBODY remembered that show! *squeels and does a happy dance* lol. The rest of ...

Hey! Just let me say, I LOVE Dance with my father, and I think this poem is basically it's equivelant. So yeah, this is great. One thing I saw was ...

I like the idea a lot! Can I just maybe suggest some things? She was just sixteen, When she jumped into that car. Mama didn’t know she’d gone, And papa ...

This is really pretty! It painted wonderful pictures in my mind. I really like it, it's beautiful. This is my favorite line: She yearns to be loved, yet dances with ...

That's very pretty. And very thought-provoking. The entire time I was reading I had butterflies in my stomach. I really have nothing bad to say besides watch you grammar, and ...

This is amazingly gorgeous. I love it. The cherry-blossom petals are falling like tears into my hair. (This is pretty, almost like a haiku. I like it a lot) This ...

This is absolutely gorgeous. Your imagery is beautiful. I love the bumpy flow at the first, and then how it smooths towards the end. This is the most amazing part: ...

I love this. It's heartbreaking, yet so true. The metaphors are beautiful. The first stanza is especially. My favorite line is this: I was a bud, Awaiting bloom on the ...

I love this, Risa. Your imagery is BEAUTIFUL, especially this stanza: An echo Of a dangerous beauty. Causing babes to panic When the true threat has passed That's GORGEOUS. The ...

I really like this. It was sweet, (and very appropriate for mother's day). Only problem was it was a bit too simple. I would have liked to have seen memories, ...