ThirdBetrayle

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem and for the positive feedback ^-^ I've also noticed that my poems are nothing close to standard poems. They lack the...poetic structure, ...

This poem was meant to reflect how deceiving things can be; you hot it right :D I loved that line as well. I was actually sketching a picture and I ...

Haha!! Thanks love. The ending is one of my favorites because throughout the poem I build up so much self consciousness and masking the pain underneath but the end comes ...

Thank you!!

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Such a touching review! Oh, I feel so honored to read this. I must say your review made me smile for the first time today; thank you! You understood every ...

Many thanks, love

Okay :3 Thanks for pointing this out to me. I will continue to work on it because I felt the same way about it but I've yet to think of ...

I found the men steal cycle one hilarious for some reason. We are terrible people XD

Oh, this just made me smile. Thank you so much for your encouraging comment. I really do appreciate it. (And I'm so glad that you noticed the intentional enjambments!!!!).

That's exactly what I was aiming to do. I had so many thoughts rocketing through my mind and driving me crazy that I finally just had to step back and ...

Thank you for the awesome feedback and I'm happy to see someone else can relate to this as well. This poem actually took a lot of time to write because ...