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I doubt you'll be interested in my suggestions after being bludgeoned by everyone elses, but I'll give it a go anyway. I am very open minded in regards to the ...

So I randomly came across this short story while looking though the science fiction section. I picked this one because its rating was eighteen. But now that I've read it, ...

Alright so now Blake meets the girl in AP Biology. I have a question. What's her name? Did I miss that or was it never said. I really enjoyed this ...

That was awesome. I love reading peoples older works. I can hardly believe that you made this in first or second grade though. I wasn't able to write at all ...

I really liked this. You've got a really fun story idea to build upon from here. I could iminge this either being terribly good or terribly bad. PM when you ...

That would definetly have to be It by Stephen King. This books took the clown theme and made it unaccessable to other authors unless they want to be compared to ...

So I finally read it. :D It was awesome. I love how your descriptions of the school that I go to. I liked the vibe of the story so far. ...

I liked it; very palpable emotions at some parts. There were two parts that confused me. When she went to cry in the bathroom, Aaryn came in. Wasn't it a ...

I really liked it. :D I liked the imagery, though the rythmn was a bit mixed up and hard to centralize in my thoughts. Overall: GOOD!!!! That's a like for ...

First of all: I loved this. I loved the way it was worded. I loved the places were you split the lines. It sounds like someone who's having a hard ...

This was really interesting and all, but at the point were she goes into the class and meets this guy who is the teachers nephew I started droning off in ...

I loved the story, but I did think it was lacking a little bit of emotion. But overall it was great. I think some parts could have been more scary. ...

The last three stanza where what caught my attention the most. I liked the rythmn and the emotion there. Through and through. This was rather good, but I find that ...

I loved it. The emotion was palpable. There was never a part in it where I was uninterested. I loved that about it; I was constantly interested. Stephen King, Dean ...

I liked it. Good job. At times I felt as if things where being repeated in with a different use of words. Sometimes the rythmn wouldn't play along that well ...