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Re: The Messenger
That was so great! I loved the details! The pictures you created were vivid and clear. And your punctuation was fantastic! I think. I'm not good with punctuation so yea. ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Warning: Sappy, may cause loss of apetite or vomitting
How in the whole wide world is this SAPPY???? That was AWESOME!!!! I got completely hooked as so as I started reading! The imagery and word choice was fantastic! I ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Oh my god
I really liked it!! I especially like the first stanza. I like the description. Not exactly your word choice, but it was still really nice!! :D Also the ending kind ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Foolish Hope
Oh my gosh. That was FANTASTIC. That was so great. Definitely should be published. Humorous, rolls off the tongue, word choice is AWESOME!!!! I wish i wrote it. :cry:
Mar 31, 2009 -
Re: Am i fine in my suffering?
There have always been things that I wished I could do and they'll always be things that I can't...(really love those lines) and I've tried and I've practiced but it's ...
Mar 30, 2009