TheTruthLiesWithin

Hello NewDivides :) I'm Truth! Alright, I'll start with the unpleasant. These are my comments, suggestions, corrections, anything :) She could barely see the full moon, much less the dark ...

Hello Poet! This is good :) No mistakes I can see, only that capital you missed there, Just put me in a pet carrier. Because a lion without his roar ...

Hey T :) I've only got some nitpicks, Their slight flutter of them soothes me; There's no need of using 'of them' in there since you already used 'their' My ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth! First impression, this looks long. Second, you didn't write anything in your spoiler! Haha, let's move on. I'll start with the nitpicks, as I always ...

Hey there :) I'm Truth and I'll review you tonight! First off, the format is really bad... It discourages me a lot, i was almost not goin gto read it ...

Hey there Jenth :) I'll be as harsh as I can! “Yes, Uncle Kronos , comma ” Taisu said, putting away his restlessness. This should be a comma, not a ...

Hey there! First, welcome to YWS! I'm Truth and I'll review your poem today :) I want to write a love song , T o take your breath away . ...

Hey Carly :) Truth again to review! It was clear that Raleigh liked Archer too but she was not my concern. This should be past tense like the rest of ...

Hey :) I'll do a quick review since lots of people already replied. When I hear your soothing voice, I smile and feel rejoice d . past? Every time we ...

Hey again :) Here to review chapter 2! It had been a couple days This should be in past tense, as the rest of the chapter/story. “Yeah, and I’ve got ...

Hey there! Fist off, welcome to YWS, hope you'll like it here :) Now, onto the review, I felt it. T he pain , I mean. Only for a second. ...

Hey Katty :) If the world wasn't so vast, and my house , not as clean I would've been here on another morning, W alking in quiet dawn to see ...

Hey there :) C'est bon de voir quelqu'un d'autre qui parle francais! Haha I'm Truth and I'll review this chapter tonight :) I'll be starting with nitpicks, some grammar mistakes ...

Hey A shallow puddle , N ear the middle of the road . The clouds were now tired , F rom crying so much This stanza seems a bit broken ...

Hello Soul :) I'll start with some nitpicks and point out some things, just to improve your grammar skills and such. Fall was soon be knocking at our front door, ...