TheThing

This is a really great poem. I didn't find many mistakes but I would like to point out those that I did. Thanks for the review. All of the mistakes ...

Thanks guys. I can honestly say I've never been this happy in my life. Also, I changed the "Thanks to you" from the end of the stanza to the beginning. ...

While I really appreciate the kind words, and I hate to state the idea behind the poem, I feel like some of you are missing the point a bit. Yes, ...

First, I would like to thank you for reviewing my work. All of your comments are appreciated, and I'm glad to hear that you guys could understand the poem. JoJo, ...

... There is absolutely nothing to say about this, Yeah, I was just kind of looking to share it, see if people could connect to how I'm feeling. It's nice ...

Thanks Max, I'm glad you liked my story. This was posted after my first editing session, and I'm in the middle of my second. I'm sure if you read through ...

I... I honestly don't know what to say. This was the most positive review I've ever had. Usually something is wrong, or this part doesn't feel right, or there's a ...

This poem does not having any feeling/it's boring/it's wordy I think some people are missing the point. It's supposed to be boring, it's supposed lack emotions, and it's supposed to ...

Thank you for your reviews. I'm always open to help, and always take what you have to say into consideration. Like I said, I'm not that good at rhyming, so ...

Sorry, I've been away for a while, and didn't have much internet. I did make some changes to it after posting it, since no one was able to review it ...

Stoney: Thank you for your help. I'm still new at poetry, and really don't see myself sitting down and writing something again. But I didn't see myself writing this, so ...

For those annoyed at the flashbacks, I purposely integrated them. Well, the first one was integrated. The other 2 were pretty much put there. In real life, the screen doesn't ...

Wow, what a way to end chapter. You didn't have any mistakes that just stood out, and besides I generally don't go over spelling mistakes. This is a great beginning ...